My name is Natalie, I have a big family. I have a twin sister call Nicole and a older brother call Rick. My dad is very nice, he doesn't care about himself, he just want us to go to nice school. My mom is a nice cook. I really have a fantastic family.
Natalie, you have to use proper capitalization in the title.
ReplyDeleteAlso, you need to use proper spacing: there is a space after a period or comma.
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