Journal 38 - Phenomenon

         My phenomenon is the enemies attacking the villagers. They burst into the village furiously, and because they heard that their boss had been killed, they become more angry. They start burning there village, and they walk into fire without fear. The villagers are screaming for help, and nothing can change it. Their going to die. They turned everything the villagers like into dust, and they killed people who screamed. All the trees and house are burned into dust, none of the villagers was alive. Expect the main character snow, who had been watching and hiding on the tree. They can turn people into stone by touching them. They were meant to be killed.

Journal 37- My Setting

            The first setting in my story is the village that snow lives called the I don't know village on a snowy mountain, and the second setting is at a normal place you see now. Like the ones with a lot of buildings and streets. Then, the other villager's village, it actually looks the same. And then, back to snow's village, which had been turn into the bad guy's cafe. And it looks terrible, and there are lava(what?!). And when her mother got back to the village, there are butterflies flying and flowers growing. Then, they live happily ever after. 

Journal 36- my hero

           My hero is brave and friendly, and she is a female. That's just call her snow. Snow lives in a village in the mountains. One day, their enemies came and killed all the villager in the village. She become very angry, so she joined all the villages in the mountain to fight back. Before that, Snow tried to go to the big cities and search for help. No one believed her, and they thought that she made it up. People also thought that she was a homeless child. So she ran back to the mountain and look for other village, then she stayed with one village (for one night) and began to tell them what happened. They told her to call all the villages in the mountain and have a revenge. At night they went to snow's village and saw her village's enemies, and they killed them. At last, they win and Snow found her mom and they lived happily ever after.