Thursday, August 23, 2018
Journal 1 - My Summer
This summer ,I went to Okinawa with my friend,the weather was pretty good .The best part of this trip is going diving into the sea ,seeing the fish and and coral reef ,The next we feed the fish breads ,I don't even know that fish loves to eat bread.And the water is so deep and cool,
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Natalie, you need to work on where you put your spaces. There is no space before a comma or period. There is a space after a comma or period.
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